Regulärer Preis: 26,95 €
Für 1 Guthaben kaufen
Für 26,95 € kaufen
Von Chrystyna K. Lucyk Am hilfreichsten 17.05.2018
interesting but dry
Narration and prose staccato. Mistakes in the text, twice in one scene, for example, the queen takes off her uncomfortable headdress, once as a brown-haired woman, next as a blonde. Owen's desire for Catherine seems to come from nowhere. He fantasizes about her but it all seems too contrived when they come together. There was no build up between his routine reports and when she flirts with him... The first-person present tense is also jarring. As entertainment, it's fine.